tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5980661477245033955.post5795626306647223070..comments2023-11-01T11:17:40.377-04:00Comments on True Stories, Honest Lies: Friday Fiction: You picked up a hitch-hiker...Laurahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06434407684834155358noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5980661477245033955.post-4486883967019390742010-05-21T14:03:28.741-04:002010-05-21T14:03:28.741-04:00Beautiful flow, very peaceful, but with a great to...Beautiful flow, very peaceful, but with a great touch of the erotic. <br /><br />I love your fiction!<br /><br />cjCJ Poindexterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06468168710219175873noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5980661477245033955.post-24694050213897449862010-05-21T12:19:37.724-04:002010-05-21T12:19:37.724-04:00"You" should have disregarded the rules ..."You" should have disregarded the rules of the road.<br /><br />Smooth flow, and enjoyable read.pegjethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15255191759031800811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5980661477245033955.post-59434071155046900132010-05-21T10:10:08.235-04:002010-05-21T10:10:08.235-04:00Great, lovely descriptive details such as the hand...Great, lovely descriptive details such as the hands set at 10 and 2 on the steering wheel.<br /><br />Loved the first sentence! The whole piece was dreamlike, soft, and tender.Marisa Birnshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17945909737147497606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5980661477245033955.post-47155190131568649732010-05-21T09:57:10.398-04:002010-05-21T09:57:10.398-04:00a most people would have seen a serial killer..nic...a most people would have seen a serial killer..nice little fantasy..Michael Solenderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01120045114297450520noreply@blogger.com