tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5980661477245033955.post6332394820996801686..comments2023-11-01T11:17:40.377-04:00Comments on True Stories, Honest Lies: Friday FictionLaurahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06434407684834155358noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5980661477245033955.post-1986452726259198872009-10-12T11:36:07.879-04:002009-10-12T11:36:07.879-04:00This is beautiful.This is beautiful.Mark Kerstetterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13307987573435067415noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5980661477245033955.post-79039951225472268342009-10-11T22:22:38.559-04:002009-10-11T22:22:38.559-04:00I enjoyed your story very much. I love your charac...I enjoyed your story very much. I love your characters and look forward to reading more about them.<br /><br />I think it's sweet how Red-Haired Annie was enjoying the silence, until it spooked her friend so. The last line is so refreshing and sweet. I am jealous of their friendship.<br />~2Tomara Armstronghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17185889402088565686noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5980661477245033955.post-48643038770944342009-10-11T10:13:46.300-04:002009-10-11T10:13:46.300-04:00Creative use of spacing. Welcome.Creative use of spacing. Welcome.Carrie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05093923008179106837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5980661477245033955.post-26128562990528748382009-10-11T08:31:48.873-04:002009-10-11T08:31:48.873-04:00Loved the sock soup and the runaway dough!
I can r...Loved the sock soup and the runaway dough!<br />I can really see the characters, welcome to #fridayflash!mazzz_in_Leedshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01498100483681096442noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5980661477245033955.post-57821604121400095892009-10-10T11:08:04.878-04:002009-10-10T11:08:04.878-04:00Your characters are well developed and their voice...Your characters are well developed and their voices clear. I enjoy reading first person narrative like this. Good job.Susan Crosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05076064230626935030noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5980661477245033955.post-70320649784649484832009-10-09T16:51:17.656-04:002009-10-09T16:51:17.656-04:00Beautiful; I read this story slowly, imagining you...Beautiful; I read this story slowly, imagining your voice telling it, at what I imagine would be your pace. I liked the space you left, when Crazy Jane described the silence, it fit right in with the pacing. Very satisfying.Doriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08556503256253165034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5980661477245033955.post-19741667926456758832009-10-09T14:43:46.874-04:002009-10-09T14:43:46.874-04:00Well sometimes I welcome the silence...
But it is...Well sometimes I welcome the silence...<br /><br />But it is good to wake up and realize that some things were all a dream.<br /><br />Welcome!Marisa Birnshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17945909737147497606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5980661477245033955.post-16554115179774658542009-10-09T14:01:55.173-04:002009-10-09T14:01:55.173-04:00I think that I would become a nightowl around her!...I think that I would become a nightowl around her! Savor the silence... Welcome to #fridayflash!Laura Enohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09982794146667832204noreply@blogger.com